When I was 15 or 16
years old, I’m started to be interested in travels, I considered a backpacking
like heroes jejeje because I saw them like survivors, and I always wanted to do
it. But I knew that time I still being a
girl who can’t travel with out her family. My mon in that time was a very control
mother, and I knew that should be a few
years to finally go out myself, so, I thought that if I do a travel in a short
distance my mom could say Yes!. And I made it, I’ve got my permission to travel
alone (it wasn’t ALONE, I went with my boyfriend but it means “ with out my
family”)
So, when I had 17,
that summer, I went to Valparaiso, because i just went there once and almost
remembered. We never being travelling alone before. Actually, we didn’t know what we should do. Jajajaj,
I mean money administration, food, accomodation, etc. We just take the bus and
we arrived in Valparaiso, we didn’t know the streets or anything.
For luck, my boyfriend spoke to someone who had a bedroom
free in Cerro Polanco, and we take it. We just used it for sleep because we
passed all day walking, knowing Valparaiso, the first day we went to Pedro
Montt St and we saw a carnaval, I don’t remember what parties was, but I loved
it, the music, the dancers, artists, painters, everything was so alive that a
feel agog to see more and more. We can’t stop walking everyday of that holiday,
we ate “chorrillana”, fish, sellfish, anything. We went to the port, the elevators, the beach,
the Valparaiso market.
I considerer that holiday like the best because It was the first time that I vas alone, sighseeing just what i'm wanted to see, walking where my feet take me. After that y traveled to another plays. And my next holiday, I will love to go, to the North.
I also have gone to valparaiso and there have been two times in which I have wanted to be going to eat "chorrillana" to a place that is called "J. Cruz" and both times it has been so full that up to the people tape-worm that to do a row to enter, this way that even I could not have eaten there.
ResponderEliminarArlyn,
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Your description seems very interesting, I could perceive the mood you were in travelling alone for the first time. However, you NEED to work on your editing, this text has too many mistakes that make it hard to read. Please check these obs.;
… I(’m) started to be interested in travels,
…I considered a backpacking like heroes (?) BACKPACKERS WERE HEROES?
That AT THAT TIME I WAS still (being) a girl who (can’t) COULDN’T travel without her family.
AT THAT TIME, My mo(n) M WAS a very controlLING mother, and I knew that IT should be a few years to finally go out BY myself, so, I thought that if I Did a SHORT TRIP (travel in a short distance) my mom could say Yes!.
So, when I (had) WAS 17, that summer, I went to Valparaiso, because i just HAD GONE (went) there once and almost DIDN’T? remember(ed). We HAD never TRAVELLED (being travelling) alone befote
…We just (take) TOOK the bus
… LUCKILY, (For luck,) my boyfriend spoke to someone who had a bedroom free in Cerro Polanco, and we (take) TOOK it. We just used it (for) TO sleep because
(agog ADJECTIVE, NOT VERB) to see more and more. We (can’t) COULDN’T stop
I consider(er) that holiday like the best because It was the first time that I vas alone, sighseeing just what i'm wanted to see, walking where my feet (take) TOOK me. After that (y traveled to another plays) I’VE TRAVELLED TO OTHER PLACES. And my next holiday, I (will) WOULD? love to go, to the North.
Cheers,,
JC